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 p.1 #8 · May+Brian::Wedding::Aptos, CA | |
Hey Scott,
I hear ya on the 2nd shooting part. One can definitely get the creative juices going at an "easier" rate when the pressure is not on. For some c+c buddy,
#1 - wish this was sharper, looks a little soft like you dragged the shutter a bit. Good eye, but would have been better if the shoes were sharp and not the sheet it was on.
#2 - is the hairspray your point of subject? I'm a little lost in the composition since the pic is still a little soft and my eyes are wondering around for that focal point.
#3-5 - Good job on the journalist part especially on 5. I like the framing and way to capture the moment
14 - good eye!
15 - is thinking outside the box, I would have done the same thing there.
I'm not a big fan of the b/w converts on these since i know that you can do better like on that e-session you last did that looked like it was smothered w/ some chocolate goodness ..mmmMMm..
Hope this helps some man, I know you do some great work, but I feel (from what you have posted) that you could have done better with the little details.
Hope everyone had a good holiday, back to work in the a.m.
::conrad::
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