Rowan at Six Weeks

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p.1 #1 · Rowan at Six Weeks

My daughter brought our grandson, Rowan, over the other night. After nursing, he crashed on her lap. He was too peaceful to risk moving the bib.

Your c&c are welcomed.

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Nov 30, 2008 at 03:49 AM

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p.1 #2 · Rowan at Six Weeks

I'm an amateur also looking to improve. Take my comments with that in mind!

It's a beautiful scene, nicely captured. The background is nicely blurred with nothing competing with the subject, except the bib which you explained, and anyway that doesn't detract for me - it's a 'natural' part of such a scene.

It appears that your focal point is around the mouth and shoulder area. Slightly more depth of focus would have kept the eyes sharp too. Just my 2c!

Nice shot on the whole, definitely a keeper.

Nov 30, 2008 at 09:46 AM

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p.1 #3 · Rowan at Six Weeks

Canon ball wrote:
I'm an amateur also looking to improve. Take my comments with that in mind!

It's a beautiful scene, nicely captured. The background is nicely blurred with nothing competing with the subject, except the bib which you explained, and anyway that doesn't detract for me - it's a 'natural' part of such a scene.

It appears that your focal point is around the mouth and shoulder area. Slightly more depth of focus would have kept the eyes sharp too. Just my 2c!

Nice shot on the whole, definitely a keeper.
I agree. A nice shot that could be improved with more DOF.

Nov 30, 2008 at 12:17 PM

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p.1 #4 · Rowan at Six Weeks

My Simple Suggestions:

1. More DOF next time.

2. Convert to BW this time.

3. Consider a crop to a square format (this time).

I hope these suggestions help you.

Nov 30, 2008 at 12:57 PM

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p.1 #5 · Rowan at Six Weeks

Thanks to all for the input.

Steady: I'll try suggestions 2 and 3 today - results later.

Thanks again.

Nov 30, 2008 at 03:01 PM

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p.1 #6 · Rowan at Six Weeks

Black and White / Square Crop

I cropped it tight because I wanted to avoid a partial-amputation of his hand and leaving the hand in the pictue didn't seem to work for me.

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Nov 30, 2008 at 03:37 PM

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p.1 #7 · Rowan at Six Weeks

Crops are a personal choice.

I did not try to crop the image before.

I "envisioned" both the head and the hand in the picture. But...like I said...I did not crop it. Since the image posted was too large for me to see on screen at one view (without scrolling) I can not tell.

Hmmm...I think showing more of the body/pillow AND the hand will look better....more like "sleeping" infant rather than "head."

But...it is your call.

The bw looks nice.

Nov 30, 2008 at 10:14 PM

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