Did you try it with a stronger rim camera right? Her belt blends into the background a bit. Small nit pick but I know you seek perfection in your images
The idea was to make it very dark in this setup.
When you look at www.frankdoorhof.com/portfolio in the section movement there are some more jump shots.
Most are much lighter.
On the fill version the border is barely visable but very very dark indeed.
