I love it - especially the white 'v'. I would recommend running a face softening filter, like Portraiture, on her to reduce the hairs on her skin. Other than that - GREAT SHOT AND COLOR!!
I find the eyes unrealistly bright, especially when compared to the hair and lips. To me they look Photoshopped or perhaps the rest of the photo was Photoshopped in the other direction.
If your goal was to highlight the eyes, then this is the shot to show that.
Just another opinion, of course.
I really like the intensity created by the harshness of the light. The eyes are wonderful but I would like to see a little more color on the lips. Not much but just a little. If you add too much it would distract too much from the eyes but right now they look too dry.
The eyes look just great....I am not sure if the pp for the eyes hurt the rest of the image...her face just looks way overdone...but I am sure that can be fixed...