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 p.1 #8 · Riverbank Sunset(+2 added) | |
Thank you everyone for the comments and criticisms! I knew this would be a difficult one to get across given all the different monitor setups to be viewed on, with the darkness of the foreground rock (and far treed shoreline too probably, there is slight fall colour detail there, too). I know my monitor is setup a little brighter than it could be, just a matter of preference, but I edited this to the histogram and checked it after on 2 laptops as well, granted though all three our systems are running Firefox 3 with colour management enabled. I will be sure there is detail there if it comes to printing this, you can be sure.
That all said, I agree with the square crop suggestions, and almost did for presentation but didn't so as not to lose the reflected light on the sand in the lower left. I also have a similar but different scene with no sand or rocks, just water in the foreground anyway. I wish I could have moved for more sand and no rocks, but it was just more rocks to my right, and to the left the sand bar in the middleground blocked the reflection of the sun in the water there. Dan's good suggested crop I may investigate further though, losing about half the rock and keeping the reflective sand near the water's edge.
Thanks again all!
David
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Minor tech issues with this one too, some flare/ghosting from light the sunlight bouncing around in between the lens and grad nd filter. I've since started hand holding the gnd in such circumstances, to adjust it's angle and reduce the flare.
