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p.1 #1 · Festival of World Cultures Ireland


# 1 Sargent Garcia


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# 2 Sargent Garcia


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# 3 Sarent Garcia


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# 4 Sargent Garcia


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# 5 Samba da Rua


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# 6 Samba da Rua


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# 7 Dakha Brakha


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Aug 30, 2008 at 08:07 AM
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p.1 #2 · Festival of World Cultures Ireland


1 is nice - would be better if we could see his eyes and had the exposure turned down a bit (in photoshop). Great framing - I might leave a smidge more above his hat but good.

2 for me has too much exposure range and so some is too dark.

3 is very nice - expression, colors focus - just needs the rest of the right arm to be perfect. I am being picky.

4 awkward crop through the hips - rule of thumb between the joints. Too much above.

5 great shot - focussed, good depth, good emotion - just needs to not have that bar through her waste to be perfect. I would crop bottom off and left to salvage and I think it would be really nice.

6 has problem on bottom - oof fence line or something - and arm in way - I think too busy but great colors and subject

7 given the big grey bottom left - I would crop lots - the big hat competes with the rest and would be better bigger.

Good shooting in a tough spot with low light and lots of motion and obstructions.

Sep 01, 2008 at 07:25 PM
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p.1 #3 · Festival of World Cultures Ireland


A nice set. I agree with Scott's suggestions. Also, number sever seems to have a red cast. (Look closely at the fur hat color and her face.) Perhaps +10 green color adjustment would be a simple first approximation.

Sep 03, 2008 at 02:05 AM

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