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p.1 #1 · Hanakapai Beach pt 1 (5.5)


Continuing my series from my hike out to the beach...

The water winded its way to the ocean...and was super rad. If only I was there at sunset :-0

c/c always encouraged!

aF

1
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3096/2758761753_0e0e223a35_o.jpg

fixed horizon

2
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3080/2746705476_b16efa1025_o.jpg


2a
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3187/2745869589_c0d1899d4a_o.jpg

liked the texture in the conversion

3
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3036/2745869507_07517b922a_o.jpg


4
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3143/2745867643_986cc59b4f_o.jpg

this was an attempt at a pano (4 shot, square pattern) and didnt work out...but...i feel the shot has a lot of potential

5
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3192/2745869341_52f4e96674_o.jpg



I know a bit much but it would take forever to post these in smaller bunches!

Edited by aFeinPhoto.com on Aug 12, 2008 at 11:02 PM GMT

Edited on Aug 13, 2008 at 04:02 AM



Aug 13, 2008 at 02:47 AM
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p.1 #2 · Hanakapai Beach pt 1 (5.5)


Like #1 and 2a, #5 like the DoF here and comp.

Can I suggest, ND8 filter this would really work well to flatten the ripples in the water.
#1 I thinks need a bit of straightening

Gavin

Edited on Aug 13, 2008 at 03:08 AM



Aug 13, 2008 at 03:07 AM
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p.1 #3 · Hanakapai Beach pt 1 (5.5)


Hey Aaron,

Some very interesting shots here! I really like your #1 shot a lot. Great work on the B&W conversion on that one! My other favorite was the last one. What a cool shot with all of those footprints! Man, I have to go try that next time I am at the beach...

Jim



Aug 13, 2008 at 03:29 AM
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p.1 #4 · Hanakapai Beach pt 1 (5.5)


The last one works like an optical illusion. If you look at it and look away then look back at it sometimes it will appear to be inverted. The footsteps will look like they are projecting from the sand instead of indented into it.


Aug 13, 2008 at 04:06 AM
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p.1 #5 · Hanakapai Beach pt 1 (5.5)


Hello Aaron,

Good work on the first one. A fine conversion and good sense of flow in the lines. I think you are right about the light. That said, the last one is a hoot - it's how I used to feel when arriving at work and finding way too much to do and not knowing where to start .

hugh



Aug 13, 2008 at 04:36 AM
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p.1 #6 · Hanakapai Beach pt 1 (5.5)


Nice stuff, Aaron!
I like the 1st very much....Sweet perspective and the conversion is excellent!
The last makes me think.....which way did he go

Barry



Aug 13, 2008 at 04:58 AM
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p.1 #7 · Hanakapai Beach pt 1 (5.5)


Hey all!

Good response from everyone and thanks for the crit.

Gavin - Thanks for the notes. I def would like a nd8 filter but no funds...also in this situation I actually prefer the texture of the water for the shot.

Jim - the footprints shot was just serendipitious. I was leaving the cave (shots later) and the low light was making all the footprints pop in the semi soft sand. No idea how many people's feet are there!

thanks all!

aF



Aug 13, 2008 at 03:21 PM
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p.1 #8 · Hanakapai Beach pt 1 (5.5)


Nice series Aaron. How long a hike is it out to that beach and how strenuous on a scale of 1-10?

RWW



Aug 13, 2008 at 07:50 PM
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p.1 #9 · Hanakapai Beach pt 1 (5.5)


#1 is my favorite. nice conversion and lots of depth. good job & I'm sure a proud one to show. art


Aug 13, 2008 at 08:50 PM
aFeinberg
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p.1 #10 · Hanakapai Beach pt 1 (5.5)


Roger - i didnt find it very difficult at all...in fact i could have jogged it if i really wanted...and i know people do it barefoot...but then again people do the kalalau hike barefoot too

art - thanks...funny how everyone is going for 1 and it wasnt even my first pick...glad i posted :-)

aF



Aug 14, 2008 at 02:10 AM
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p.1 #11 · Hanakapai Beach pt 1 (5.5)


I'm just loving the first one. Great DOF...leading lines..excellent conversion...beautiful work.


Thanks to Yogi I am now transfixed on the footprints!!!



Aug 14, 2008 at 10:11 AM





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