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p.1 #1 · Panorama

Hasselblad XPan II, 30mm, Fujifilm Neopan

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2008 © Kaden K.

Aug 12, 2008 at 02:02 AM

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p.1 #2 · Panorama

Cool - I like it. Great contrast in shapes; the B&W keeps it clean.

Aug 12, 2008 at 02:05 AM

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p.1 #3 · Panorama

Wow, that is sweeeet. Very difficult to offer any critique here. The image is crisp, the composition is wonderful and the visual impact is substatial. Exceptional.

Aug 12, 2008 at 02:11 AM

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p.1 #4 · Panorama

Sweet.

Aug 12, 2008 at 02:14 AM

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p.1 #5 · Panorama

Thanks

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Aug 12, 2008 at 03:01 AM

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p.1 #6 · Panorama

Very nice lines, focus symmetry, depth, reflection and cropping. Very nice, Scott

Aug 12, 2008 at 04:44 AM

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p.1 #7 · Panorama

Thanks.

Edited on Aug 12, 2008 at 05:17 AM

Aug 12, 2008 at 05:17 AM

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p.1 #8 · Panorama

I'd normally consider an image like number two to be too centered. However, with the strong vertical and horizontal lines I feel it works with a Mondrian style composition.

Edited on Aug 12, 2008 at 06:53 AM

Aug 12, 2008 at 06:52 AM

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p.1 #9 · Panorama

Thanks Auntipode. To be perfectly frank I seldom pay attention to the rule of 3rds.
As some of my old photography teacher(s) used to say "the only rule of photography
is that there are no rules". That means that I am a self-described emotional photog.

Btw, that's me right in the middle.

Edited on Aug 12, 2008 at 07:20 AM

Aug 12, 2008 at 07:18 AM

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p.1 #10 · Panorama

Love the first three, with the first image my fav. Crisp, engaging, vertiginous.Great variety of geometries.
Second works especially well because of the figure apparently suspended in the middle. What's going on there? Keeps me coming back.

Scott G

Aug 12, 2008 at 07:27 AM

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p.1 #11 · Panorama

These are very nice and you have had a wise mentor. My mentor stressed "there are no secrets to photography, only techniques one has not learned yet"

Aug 12, 2008 at 07:38 AM

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p.1 #12 · Panorama

To me, a good image must say something. It may be beautifully harmonious in proportion or jarringly harsh, but it shouldn't be dull. How do you explain what makes a good image? At best the "rules" are conventions that simplify discussion. They aren't art and they don't make something art. They may help make something interesting pleasing, but following rules won't make something dull interesting.

Edited on Aug 12, 2008 at 12:04 PM

Aug 12, 2008 at 11:59 AM

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p.1 #13 · Panorama

Auntipode I very much agree with you on the dull images.

Edited on Aug 12, 2008 at 05:39 PM

Aug 12, 2008 at 05:38 PM

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p.1 #14 · Panorama

Nice dynamic composition, Kaden.

Aug 12, 2008 at 10:27 PM

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p.1 #15 · Panorama

Number 1----Wow!...I really like that one!
I like all of them, thank you for posting them here. I find them very inspiring.

Edited on Aug 13, 2008 at 11:34 AM

Aug 13, 2008 at 07:33 AM

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p.1 #16 · Panorama

Very nice! Gotta love film!

Aug 13, 2008 at 11:57 AM


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