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Archive 2008 · Any way to improve on this?

  
 
sino408
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p.1 #1 · Any way to improve on this?


A shot I got on the train ride to Tibet. Train was stopped at the station and I knew something cool was going to come up. What do you all think? Is there anything I could've done "better"? The title for this is "Lost"

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1344/1027534725_ed2dfcf5bd.jpg



Aug 10, 2008 at 12:25 AM
Scott Stoness
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p.1 #2 · Any way to improve on this?


For me there is just too much going on - man looking left, man walking buy, people doing different stuff in each window, and big reflection in your window.

To improve I would photoshop the windows dark.

To reshoot I would zoom in on just the man walking.



Aug 10, 2008 at 12:40 AM
Kaden K.
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p.1 #3 · Any way to improve on this?


I like the image itself. I would probably improve on the angle of shooting by being
either straight at the subjects or accentuate the angle at the time of shooting.

That said play a tad at improving light in PS.



Aug 10, 2008 at 11:19 AM
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p.1 #4 · Any way to improve on this?


i love the contrast of on man moving and the other man going, "oh, crap, where am i?"
the reflection is a little distracting.
it would have been supercool if the train were moving too.



Aug 15, 2008 at 08:35 PM





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