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p.1 #1 · Kine, first try with fashion


She hates standing in front of a camera, but I think she did a really great job.

seccond try with my new flashes, got to love them


Styling: Yvonne F.
Model: Kine
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cam right ab1600 @1/2 pw cam right beauty dish.

cam left ab1600 @1/4pw large umbrella
cam left ab1600 @1/4pw large umbrella behind model

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Aug 09, 2008 at 11:44 PM
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p.1 #2 · Kine, first try with fashion


wot I tought this one was good.

Aug 10, 2008 at 08:10 AM
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p.1 #3 · Kine, first try with fashion


nice work, might just ps the sky all the way down to the wood to help the black pants stand out. They almost get lost against the dark landscape.

God bless

steve

Aug 10, 2008 at 12:00 PM
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p.1 #4 · Kine, first try with fashion


thx I'll try that.

here is a other one from the shoot.

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Aug 10, 2008 at 01:52 PM
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I have to ask.. what could be done better on the last photo? I can se that its tight on the left side.

Aug 11, 2008 at 06:29 AM
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p.1 #6 · Kine, first try with fashion


I'm certainly no expert, but on the second photo, something about the pose seems off to me - Her looking up into the light seems a bit awkward, or as if she's about to get abducted by a UFO. Just my opinion - take it for what it's worth.

Aug 11, 2008 at 06:56 AM
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well vanted a bit drama in the picture, like she is looking up at something that scared her.

Aug 11, 2008 at 07:54 AM
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She seems *much* too old for such a photo, IMO.

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p.1 #9 · Kine, first try with fashion


you might be right, but age is also beauty

Aug 11, 2008 at 03:46 PM
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jeremy_clay wrote:
She seems *much* too old for such a photo, IMO.

How can someone be too old for a picture? Is there a rule somewhere that precludes anyone over twenty-five from putting on some glad rags and throwing some shapes at the camera?

I prefer the first shot, very dynamic.

Edited by liamh on Aug 11, 2008 at 04:12 PM GMT

Edited on Aug 11, 2008 at 04:12 PM


Aug 11, 2008 at 04:10 PM
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double post, doh!

Edited on Aug 11, 2008 at 04:12 PM


Aug 11, 2008 at 04:11 PM
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I like both of them actually. The models age not an issue, and she is pleasing to look at. I think that a slower shutter speed would have brought up the ambient a little to balance the shots a little. Maybe the boa in the second could have been moved aside a little.

Aug 11, 2008 at 05:29 PM
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p.1 #13 · Kine, first try with fashion


thank you

here is a clasic portrait we did the same day..

styling: Yvonne F

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I also did a role over after and before on this.. you can se it on this url if interested

mouserolover

Edited by devisor on Aug 12, 2008 at 08:23 PM GMT

Edited by devisor on Aug 12, 2008 at 08:23 PM GMT

Edited on Aug 12, 2008 at 07:23 PM


Aug 12, 2008 at 07:18 PM
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p.1 #14 · Kine, first try with fashion


I love the way you have lit her in all the shots. The last one is my favorite though.

Aug 12, 2008 at 07:21 PM
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liamh wrote:
jeremy_clay wrote:
She seems *much* too old for such a photo, IMO.

How can someone be too old for a picture? Is there a rule somewhere that precludes anyone over twenty-five from putting on some glad rags and throwing some shapes at the camera?

I prefer the first shot, very dynamic.

Edited by liamh on Aug 11, 2008 at 04:12 PM GMT


For *such* a photo. His title is 'first try with fashion'. Pick up a fashion magazine and tell me what you see? The style he is emulating, regardless of light, composition, or anything else, will fail to work as fashion because of the model selected - it's the first thing anyone in thata field would notice. The light is nice, the outfit, the post work, and I understand that there's a lot of back-patting and compliments that get thrown around here, but it would not be something a serious fashion photographer would use when approaching prospective clients. It would be nice if boundaries such as age didn't exist for different fields of work, but it's the truth.

Edited on Aug 12, 2008 at 08:08 PM


Aug 12, 2008 at 08:05 PM
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jeremy_clay wrote:
liamh wrote:
jeremy_clay wrote:
She seems *much* too old for such a photo, IMO.

How can someone be too old for a picture? Is there a rule somewhere that precludes anyone over twenty-five from putting on some glad rags and throwing some shapes at the camera?

I prefer the first shot, very dynamic.

Edited by liamh on Aug 11, 2008 at 04:12 PM GMT


For *such* a photo. His title is 'first try with fashion'. Pick up a fashion magazine and tell me what you see? The style he is emulating, regardless of light, composition, or anything else, will fail to work as fashion because of the model selected - it's the first thing anyone in thata field would notice. The light is nice, the outfit, the post work, and I understand that there's a lot of back-patting and compliments that get thrown around here, but it would not be something a serious fashion photographer would use when approaching prospective clients. It would be nice if boundaries such as age didn't exist for different fields of work, but it's the truth.


I see your point, I ment by her first try

well I think I got the pose consept right. and really got to feel how the new flashes felt like vs my vivitars.. There is a bright future for me, I hope hehe.


Aug 13, 2008 at 09:16 AM
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