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Archive 2008 · Portraits & Snapshots of a Girl

  
 
Patrick Dorthy
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p.1 #1 · Portraits & Snapshots of a Girl


These are a few I took a year ago. Not sure if the color balance looks right. Please C&C.
Thank you

http://visualartistic.zenfolio.com/img/v1/p660613232.jpg

http://visualartistic.zenfolio.com/img/v1/p815342522.jpg

http://visualartistic.zenfolio.com/img/v1/p967659035.jpg

Edited on May 17, 2008 at 06:39 PM



May 17, 2008 at 06:38 PM
Patrick Dorthy
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p.1 #2 · Portraits & Snapshots of a Girl


Thank you Nick. Nice adjustment.


May 20, 2008 at 11:52 AM
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p.1 #3 · Portraits & Snapshots of a Girl


1 and 2 are too soft for my liking and I would crop in much closer to the subject with only a bit of non head showing. She is very pretty and good expression. Good eyes. Lots of cropping and sharpening would improve for me.

3 has very nice expression. The challenge is that the background is distracting but if you crop you would leave the dark post on the left and cut through her arm. I llike nicks suggestion as a compromise but would be trempted to blur the fence out in his crop and the cut through arm is not ideal. More sharpening would improve.



May 20, 2008 at 11:36 PM
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p.1 #4 · Portraits & Snapshots of a Girl


Thank you for you input Scott.


May 21, 2008 at 11:45 AM





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