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Patrick Dorthy
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Portraits & Snapshots of a Girl


These are a few I took a year ago. Not sure if the color balance looks right. Please C&C.
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May 17, 2008 at 11:38 PM
nick bellotto
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number 3 is just gorgeous!!!

I would suggest what follows:









May 20, 2008 at 02:17 PM
Patrick Dorthy
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Thank you Nick. Nice adjustment.

May 20, 2008 at 04:52 PM
Scott Stoness
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1 and 2 are too soft for my liking and I would crop in much closer to the subject with only a bit of non head showing. She is very pretty and good expression. Good eyes. Lots of cropping and sharpening would improve for me.

3 has very nice expression. The challenge is that the background is distracting but if you crop you would leave the dark post on the left and cut through her arm. I llike nicks suggestion as a compromise but would be trempted to blur the fence out in his crop and the cut through arm is not ideal. More sharpening would improve.

May 21, 2008 at 04:36 AM
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Thank you for you input Scott.

May 21, 2008 at 04:45 PM

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