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Archive 2008 · #293: Edison Phonograph

  
 
Mike Deuce
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p.1 #1 · #293: Edison Phonograph


A collection of Edison inventions including the light bulb and the phonograph.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3272/2457655359_f3ec72ddc4_o.jpg



May 01, 2008 at 09:05 PM
Mike Deuce
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p.1 #2 · #293: Edison Phonograph


C & C welcome!


May 03, 2008 at 02:45 PM
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p.1 #3 · #293: Edison Phonograph


Nice shot, my photo is of his train in Michigan, thanks for sharing.

Norm



May 03, 2008 at 11:20 PM
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p.1 #4 · #293: Edison Phonograph


Outstanding items, well composed, Mike. I'm not sure the processing to have it look "old" works for me, but it is a most interesting photo.--Frank


May 04, 2008 at 07:47 PM
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p.1 #5 · #293: Edison Phonograph


I think what gets me about this one, while I really like the treatment, is that it doesn't seem finished. It's like a half-tone overlay is missing, and needed to fill in a few darks and lines, that would pull the objects together. I find myself wanting to see more.

It does look authentic as a background illustration from an instruction manual of the time.



May 05, 2008 at 02:09 AM
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p.1 #6 · #293: Edison Phonograph


I don't know what you mean by "half-tone overlay." Can you explain?


May 05, 2008 at 09:24 PM
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p.1 #7 · #293: Edison Phonograph


Sure- I probably didn't use the right terms, which would have helped. This shot reminds me of old lithographs so a half-tone for fine detail is what came to mind.
I thought a layer with that look would add a bit more definition without detracting from the old world character you've got in this. Something that would only define the darkest details, without changing the texture or color anywhere else.

...and with that I've rambled on enough.

Here's a wiki-

Halftone



May 05, 2008 at 10:08 PM
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p.1 #8 · #293: Edison Phonograph


thanks, i'll try to tweak some things in PS


May 05, 2008 at 11:06 PM
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p.1 #9 · #293: Edison Phonograph


I'm a bit of a minimalist sometimes.... when you have amazing subjects it's often best to just pick one thing and photograph it in a cool way. This has too much for me. I'd have loved an interesting shot, angle of one item, and some dramatic lighting to enhance the mood. The less is more adage, ya know? :-)


May 06, 2008 at 10:48 PM
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p.1 #10 · #293: Edison Phonograph


yeah, i think i kind of rushed to take it rather than choosing one item and carefully thinking about lighting and composition, but i do kind of like the collection of edison items.

your idea sounds great though, maybe i'll shoot the phonograph alone and post it in a different section.



May 07, 2008 at 05:38 PM





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