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chaswes7
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p.1 #1 · Day in the Sun

Elderly gentleman sunning on a brisk February day on Mobile Bay.

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Comments are appreciated and welcomed.

Nikon D200
Nikon 50mm
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Photo has not been edited other than converting to JPEG.

Apr 10, 2008 at 12:50 PM

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p.1 #2 · Day in the Sun

Hi, welcome. To me its kind of a severe crop, and I am not sure that horizontal helps it at all.

Apr 10, 2008 at 01:07 PM

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p.1 #3 · Day in the Sun

Nice shot, I like the crop to control your subject area. You might consider a reflector to help with the deep shadows under the hat. Pretty good overall.

Apr 10, 2008 at 04:17 PM

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p.1 #4 · Day in the Sun

Question: was this posed or was this more of a PJ capture?

If it was posed, then really, step back. you have almost zero eye contact because of the glasses reflections which are impeding our view of his eyes. You have no particularly interesting expression on the subject's face, no mood or verve to make me interested and hold my interest.

If it is more PJ style, then what made you want this picture?

Apr 10, 2008 at 07:35 PM

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