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Kingdon Hawes
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Here is a picture I took right after the shooting at Von Maur in Omaha.









Mar 26, 2008 at 01:11 PM
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I like the picture. Only thing that I find a little distracting is the lightpost. maybe a slightly different angle would have worked better?


Mar 26, 2008 at 01:43 PM
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Are you in Omaha?

It would be nice to know about another FM'er from Omaha,


Ron Petersen
Omaha.



Mar 27, 2008 at 12:55 PM
Kingdon Hawes
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Ron,
Yes I live in Omaha and work for the Omaha Fire Department.

Kingdon Hawes



Mar 27, 2008 at 08:26 PM
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Moving scene. I think the shadow falling on the wreath adds to the message effectively. I agree with the lighpost comment. Some folks would clone it out; others feel that violates the reality of the image.
Scott



Apr 01, 2008 at 07:33 PM
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It is too small to tell but it looks like it needs sharpening and shadows/hightlights and historgram work.

I like the shadows. I think it would have been better to focus on one lady from back - for me it kind of confuses the mood to have many people and the lines of the buildigns. It gives it the feel more of a landscape than the mood that you are attempting.

I know you can't do it again and its difficult to shoot these pictures so I am just giving my reaction in case it helps in the future.

Condolences to the community.



Apr 03, 2008 at 08:53 PM





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