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Kingdon Hawes
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p.1 #1 · Sorrow

Here is a picture I took right after the shooting at Von Maur in Omaha.

Mar 26, 2008 at 06:11 PM

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p.1 #2 · Sorrow

I like the picture. Only thing that I find a little distracting is the lightpost. maybe a slightly different angle would have worked better?

Mar 26, 2008 at 06:43 PM

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p.1 #3 · Sorrow

Are you in Omaha?

It would be nice to know about another FM'er from Omaha,

Ron Petersen
Omaha.

Mar 27, 2008 at 05:55 PM

Kingdon Hawes
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p.1 #4 · Sorrow

Ron,
Yes I live in Omaha and work for the Omaha Fire Department.

Kingdon Hawes

Mar 28, 2008 at 01:26 AM

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p.1 #5 · Sorrow

Moving scene. I think the shadow falling on the wreath adds to the message effectively. I agree with the lighpost comment. Some folks would clone it out; others feel that violates the reality of the image.
Scott

Apr 02, 2008 at 12:33 AM

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p.1 #6 · Sorrow

It is too small to tell but it looks like it needs sharpening and shadows/hightlights and historgram work.

I like the shadows. I think it would have been better to focus on one lady from back - for me it kind of confuses the mood to have many people and the lines of the buildigns. It gives it the feel more of a landscape than the mood that you are attempting.

I know you can't do it again and its difficult to shoot these pictures so I am just giving my reaction in case it helps in the future.

Condolences to the community.

Apr 04, 2008 at 01:53 AM


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