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p.1 #1 · Bricks in the wall

It was cold and windy so her hair and coat are not ideal, but I wanted to practice.

I am looking to get better so any C&C is appreciated.

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Mar 23, 2008 at 07:35 PM

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p.1 #2 · Bricks in the wall

I am of the personal belief that children make for some of the best practice there is, you just never know when they are going to go off and be cute on you spontaneously.

Like the setup. If her vest was a bright color one of those high saturation shots would work here as well.

You have a cutey on your hands if she is yours

Mar 24, 2008 at 01:12 AM

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p.1 #3 · Bricks in the wall

I think I'd try cropping off the left third or so and maybe try warming the tone a bit - lovely young lady. Nice capture.

regards,

Bob

Mar 24, 2008 at 02:13 PM

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p.1 #4 · Bricks in the wall

I am only an amature, but here are my comments: I like the placement, but a slight crop on the left may enhance the picture more (take out the cornerof the brick wall). I think the picture is sharp, has good contrast, and captures a precious moment.

Mar 26, 2008 at 06:49 PM

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p.1 #5 · Bricks in the wall

obviously only an amatuer speller too!

Mar 27, 2008 at 01:51 AM

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p.1 #6 · Bricks in the wall

Grrr...damn dyslexia...amateur

Mar 27, 2008 at 01:52 AM


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