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p.1 #1 · Arrest

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Mar 18, 2008 at 04:25 PM

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p.1 #2 · Arrest

perhaps a tighter crop at the left side to remove the officer's side who isn't in the shot, and a tighter crop at the top to bring the focus lower.

looking good.

Mar 18, 2008 at 04:36 PM

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p.1 #3 · Arrest

Thanks.

Mar 19, 2008 at 05:43 AM

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I like the feel of the shot, but perhaps needs to be cleaned up a bit. For one, taking out the line of lights on the mid right. Either cropping or toning down the red in the sign above the arrestee. And finally a crop for the officer and possibly some blur on the background so that your subject is the center focus and not the scene behind him. Otherwise I like the "old school" feel of this shot.

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Mar 20, 2008 at 04:21 AM

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p.1 #5 · Arrest

Thanks.

Mar 20, 2008 at 08:37 PM

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p.1 #6 · Arrest

The upper third of the image is pretty much wasted. Crop above the near policeman's head and you get something that concentrates our interest on the arrest without making it look like you aimed at the wrong place.

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Mar 25, 2008 at 10:35 PM

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p.1 #7 · Arrest

Alan thanks... the silly season must have arrived!

See if you can figure out what's in focus?

Edited on Mar 26, 2008 at 03:11 AM

Mar 26, 2008 at 02:40 AM

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p.1 #8 · Arrest

Hello,

Just my two cents but I was wondering aloud to myself (I do that often my wife tells me) if perhaps cropping to just the arrested and the two police officers to the left would give an interesting head shot type shot?

Again not a pro by any stretch just my two cents.......

thanks

Mar 26, 2008 at 02:04 PM

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p.1 #9 · Arrest

Derek you got!!! You are a true photographer. One which questions rather than obey!
The answer you reach is yours to follow and yours alone and ultimately that's
what your signature will be in an image.

Edited on Mar 26, 2008 at 03:21 PM

Mar 26, 2008 at 03:20 PM


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