Bob Jarman Online Image Upload: Off
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Hi Adam,
I'll echo Scott and Scott - assuming you know the audience, the non-traditional, edgy approach could work very well.
Two very minor nits - looking at the image, imo the white of the left eye appears to too bright - competes for attention - might tone it down a bit; fix the shiny spot on the nose.
<edit> actually 3 - the tiny slice of the ear just to the right of the eyebrow, once I noticed it, has become a distraction - I keep looking for a piercing.
I like the catch-lights in the eyes,
regards,
Bob
Edited on Mar 15, 2008 at 02:36 PM
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