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Archive 2008 · Small studio shoot

  
 
Brendan Rouse
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p.1 #1 · Small studio shoot


Hi,

Would love some CC on these,
Shot with a 40D, off camera flash and a reflector
Cheers





Mar 12, 2008 at 03:14 AM
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p.1 #2 · Small studio shoot


Brendan - convert to sRGB for the web


Mar 12, 2008 at 07:34 AM
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p.1 #3 · Small studio shoot


Good looking photos and a great looking model! I'd smooth out the background though (it's a little distracting). Nice work.


Mar 12, 2008 at 08:58 AM
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p.1 #4 · Small studio shoot


Also, you decapitated her on the first one.. it's not too bad but just something to think about for next time


Mar 12, 2008 at 08:59 AM
Brendan Rouse
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p.1 #5 · Small studio shoot


I thought they were sRGB


Mar 12, 2008 at 04:52 PM
paulhodson
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p.1 #6 · Small studio shoot


No they are aRGB


Mar 12, 2008 at 06:48 PM
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p.1 #7 · Small studio shoot


Framing through head and hands or elbows is not generally recommended. Also framing with a ample amount of space between frame and main subject is recommended.


Mar 12, 2008 at 08:15 PM
Dennis Joseph
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p.1 #8 · Small studio shoot


Like the photos. The first in my opinion would have been better with more head cropped off. It's a little tight the way it is. I am curious of your white balance setting, i think the skin tones are great.


Mar 19, 2008 at 11:21 PM
Brendan Rouse
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p.1 #9 · Small studio shoot


Thanks all for your comments and cc
Dennis, I am not near my desktop, I will have a look when I get home in a few days and I will let you know
Cheers



Mar 21, 2008 at 10:18 PM
Dennis Joseph
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p.1 #10 · Small studio shoot


Thank you, I am curious they are great.


Mar 24, 2008 at 06:40 PM
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p.1 #11 · Small studio shoot


Nice images, I would personally move her fringe a little - it seems to almost interfere with the eyes. I do think you have taken some natural looking shots, which is an art in itself!

Mike



Mar 26, 2008 at 03:08 PM





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