fredmiranda.com
Login

Moderated by: Fred Miranda
Weekly assignment 306: Overhead
Deadline: August 20th noon UTC/GMT

WA Rules ยท Current entries
  

FM Forums | Weekly Assignments | Join Upload & Sell

  

Archive 2007 · WA275: Running Shoes

  
 
Daniel Heineck
Offline
• • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #1 · WA275: Running Shoes


C&C really appreciated, as this is my first (of hopefully many more to come) photo posts.

Best,
Daniel

http://web.engr.oregonstate.edu/~heineckd/FM%20Competition/Shoes3.jpg



Dec 11, 2007 at 01:55 PM
Steve Spencer
Offline
• • • • • • •
Upload & Sell: On
p.1 #2 · WA275: Running Shoes


Hi Daniel,

The shoes certainly look well worn an belie an obsession. This shot is a very interesting take on the WA. I would have liked to see less contrast in the lighting a less cluttered background, but still a very good entry. Good luck this week.

Steve S.



Dec 11, 2007 at 03:16 PM
Carrol
Offline
• • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #3 · WA275: Running Shoes


Daniel,
Welcome to the Forum!
This shot seems a bit out of focus. And the dark left edge looks a bit awkward.
But an interesting idea for the assignment. Keep posting!
regards,
Carrol



Dec 12, 2007 at 01:03 AM
Daniel Heineck
Offline
• • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #4 · WA275: Running Shoes


Thank you both for your comments. My motivation was to show the certified mound of running shoes I have (6), but was unable to get a capture that didn't involve a lot of carpet. Anyhow, it was a good exercise and I can only imagine I'll improve over time.

Daniel



Dec 12, 2007 at 02:49 PM
contre-jour
Offline
• • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #5 · WA275: Running Shoes


Welcome! Great idea and I like the close crop. A defined focal point and some contrast adjustments (while shooting (or pp may help)) would add to this image. The shadows lend themselves well to this concept. Looking forward to seeing more posts!

Jamie



Dec 12, 2007 at 03:01 PM





FM Forums | Weekly Assignments | Join Upload & Sell

    
 

Welcome back
Log in to your account