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p.1 #1 · South Australian sunset


I haven't taken many photos lately because I am trying to build a website for myself. Its a pity because the crops are beautiful at the moment; Relentless of near no rain this year they have grown quite well. I shot through a fence and used the on camera flash to light up the foreground grain. The D200 is so incredibly fast and simple to change settings with it constantly reminds me why I bought it.

How does my photo look?


http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/158/dsc2662ew7.jpg



Nov 22, 2007 at 07:25 AM
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p.1 #2 · South Australian sunset


I like the sun and the colors and the texture of the wheat.

I don't like that you have framed off the top of the tree. This picture might be better if you left the tree out or found a tree further so it fit the frame.


Good job and a difficult lighting capture.



Nov 22, 2007 at 09:14 AM
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p.1 #3 · South Australian sunset


Might be worth some pp - but this may not be to your taste







Nov 22, 2007 at 09:54 AM
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p.1 #4 · South Australian sunset


I liked the non-pp'd photo a bit better. The sun looks a bit over-exposed. It's an excellent photograph, but I do agree with Scott with regard to the framing of the tree.





Nov 23, 2007 at 07:54 PM
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p.1 #5 · South Australian sunset


Nice picture.Nice mood.I think Paul is on the right track.If you look at your histogram the pic is underexposed(maybe on purpose) Here is my attempt at it.
-Jim


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Nov 23, 2007 at 08:07 PM
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p.1 #6 · South Australian sunset


I wont deny that I am not the worlds most brilliant post processor; I do agree it could use a little help, there is a lot more detail in the grain on yours Paul and Jim.
I do have photoshop but it doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me, I find it very difficult to select the areas I want to edit and do it smoothly so it doesn't show.
As for the framing of the tree I might go back out and try it again, I couldn't really work it all in last time because I was a little pushed for time (As you can see the sun is very close to the horizon). Heres another I took. I am a bit disappointed with the level of noise, the camera was only on ISO320. Its not the greatest photo but I like it.


http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/4076/dsc2633dh9.jpg

I grabbed another one a little later just as a record shot to remind me to go back, but I liked the result to. It is perhaps a little empty but you get to see the nice colors, I would like to try it when the moon is nice and big and coming over the hill.

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/6476/dsc2668to3.jpg



Nov 23, 2007 at 09:37 PM
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p.1 #7 · South Australian sunset


Jason Lang wrote:
The sun looks a bit over-exposed.


It's impossible not to blow out the sun itself when it is in the image - it is even in the original



Nov 24, 2007 at 02:07 AM
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p.1 #8 · South Australian sunset


I agree Paul. The sun is not an easy object to control your highlights with.


Nov 24, 2007 at 02:59 AM
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p.1 #9 · South Australian sunset


Your 2nd last post if very nice. I would like to see it larger. Nicely framed with nice features and elements balanced horizontally as well as vertically.

The last post is a good idea but has too much empty space between top and bottom. I think a bit more bottom and something in the foreground (like a tree) would make it work.



Nov 24, 2007 at 11:31 AM





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