WOW - I'm surprised no on has yet commented (at the time of my posting 78 views).
Lets start with the uncomfortable subject as it holds two fold. Not only is this person poor... he is old. Intentional or not it he seems to contrast the white plastic bag; as if to say we have treated both equal kind - is this what you were thinking.
Okay, technically speaking the blacks are weak, punch them up they should be strong.
no the plastic bag is the discarded article from society that the old man uses to hold his belongings in....
re the blacks not being punchy i wanted it less punchy more subdued tonal... more like the shots in newspapers ..not everything is black and white lots of grey areas ....mmmmm
