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| p.1 #4 · First time doing corporate type head shots. |
A nice set of pics.
Some minor comments -
#1. Some won't like the bold socks in this, but you only have to please the customer, so let that be your guide.
#2 I think I would have left less space above his head and 'aimed' the camera a bit more to the right, showing more of his left shoulder.
#3 Again, I'd leave less space above her head. I would NOT show more of the shoulder in this case.
#5. The only tiny thing I would change is the slice of arm at the bottom. You needed to crop that low to show the knot of the tie, but not having the arm there would be an improvement.
#6 The bright white tie is getting a lot of attention. I'm not sure if toning it down bit would help.
#7 I like the frivolity of this one, but we should see the two parts of the tie connected.
#8 Nice. There seems to be room to crop inward to give them more impact.
Again, these are tiny nits/discussion points, not faults.