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p.1 #2 · Church League VBall, 1st time since advice | |
eric chang wrote:
Please rip these apart and tell me where I can do better!
Exposure and WB look good. Timing is good... ball and eyes. I'm not a fan of non-standard, inconsistent aspect ratios, especially when they still result in loose crops (e.g., in #4, crop under the gray sound panels and to the right of the scorer, or even eliminate the scorer since he's not really adding to the scene and just crop after the antenna).
Check the horizon in #2... use the door jambs as vertical plumb reference.
And try to avoid amputating feet... as a general rule, if the frame is cut off below the knee, then go ahead and crop up to the waist.
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