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Welcome to FM Gabe,
First, your photographic skills are far more advanced than anyone should ever expect from someone who has been "at it" for 10 months, whether s/he is 14 or 41. Very nice set. Not being anything I've ever attempted, I should say you've got the food-thing down to a fine science. Maybe a wider DOF depending on your purpose? Also, some image clean-up - the hair/thread in the lobster image for example.
I like the portraits - simple and to the point. #1031 - take care with blocked up highlights, maybe some detail can be recovered, #s 1044 and 5875 pull some detail from shadows, 7061 is over-sharpened for my taste, whatever that is worth.
On man & boy (son?), to me the building cupola and roof are distracting. One can argue the fishing poles distract also. The composition is the most complex of the set, and the extreme position of the subjects tends to lead the eye off the image. Also, the man's expression suggests you are intruding - and thus the viewer intrudes also which might prompt a negative feeling - maybe a stretch but a thought.
It would also be very helpful if the Exif can be included ar at least include the exposure data - lens FL, aperture, shutter-speed, and ISO.
Keep 'em coming,