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Bob Jarman
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Taken a year ago this month in fact, at airport hotel prior to their (Abby, mom, & brother) leaving for the Netherlands.

Browsing old unprocessed images. Not much in the way of faces but it does capture the moment...

Thoughts?

Regards,

Bob




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Feb 13, 2013 at 12:53 AM
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Well, grandma is certainly engage! The pleasure comes through strong and clear.
Wish Abby was a bit sharper, especially the head and clothes. The blurring of the hand with movement seems appropriate to me.
Along the edges of the pillows you have some very saturated shading. I think it should be dialed back in saturation/vibrance.
Scott



Feb 15, 2013 at 12:30 PM
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sbeme wrote:
Well, grandma is certainly engage! The pleasure comes through strong and clear.
Wish Abby was a bit sharper, especially the head and clothes. The blurring of the hand with movement seems appropriate to me.
Along the edges of the pillows you have some very saturated shading. I think it should be dialed back in saturation/vibrance.
Scott


Thanks Scott,

Initially exploration of a new lens and available light. Now, as I looked again it took on a different meaning, as GGJ passed in August, but of course no one would know that: the back-story. And, conveying that emotion, and her zest for life and the 'kids' via this image is probably not possible even though it holds special value for me.

Time to move on

Yes, agree could stand some moderation in saturation and vibrance.

Regards,

Bob



Feb 15, 2013 at 01:10 PM
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So much life in the image!
I can understand its special significance. Its a keeper.
Sorry for your loss but nice that she had some time to enjoy her great granddaughter.
Scott



Feb 15, 2013 at 01:20 PM
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sbeme wrote:
So much life in the image!
I can understand its special significance. Its a keeper.
Sorry for your loss but nice that she had some time to enjoy her great granddaughter.
Scott



Thanks,

And there was a table lamp blasting its "gold" on the pillows - I noticed several contaminated spots - still a WIP.



Bob



Feb 15, 2013 at 01:59 PM





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