Upload & Sell: On
Well, grandma is certainly engage! The pleasure comes through strong and clear.
Wish Abby was a bit sharper, especially the head and clothes. The blurring of the hand with movement seems appropriate to me.
Along the edges of the pillows you have some very saturated shading. I think it should be dialed back in saturation/vibrance.
Initially exploration of a new lens and available light. Now, as I looked again it took on a different meaning, as GGJ passed in August, but of course no one would know that: the back-story. And, conveying that emotion, and her zest for life and the 'kids' via this image is probably not possible even though it holds special value for me.
Time to move on
Yes, agree could stand some moderation in saturation and vibrance.