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p.1 #1 · we went to the library // FPJ


Nothing too interesting, just a trip to the library and back

C&C always appreciated!!

Thanks for looking

1. I wish I composed a bit looser here.


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6. I always cut off feet!!


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Feb 08, 2013 at 07:50 PM
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p.1 #2 · we went to the library // FPJ


I really enjoy seeing the posts of your family and kids. I think the first time I noticed your work was a post from a trip to an apple orchard. My favorite might be the "Milk, Knives and a 5 year old". You do a great job of telling a story, taking the every day activity and turning it into something interesting. Thanks for sharing.

Cam


Feb 08, 2013 at 09:57 PM
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p.1 #3 · we went to the library // FPJ


Love pictures of your beautiful children. The library photos would IMO be so much better in color, with the extremely busy backgrounds and the pattern clothes of the kids they get seriously lost by blending into their surrounding. The images are also terribly flat lacking contrast.

Dave


Feb 08, 2013 at 10:13 PM
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p.1 #4 · we went to the library // FPJ


I like 2 the most ifeel like I'm looking back in time.


Feb 08, 2013 at 11:55 PM
 



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p.1 #5 · we went to the library // FPJ


#2 is brilliant!


Feb 09, 2013 at 06:27 AM
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p.1 #6 · we went to the library // FPJ


Thanks guys!

Davenfl, you are probably right (though I kind of like the contrast, maybe it does need a bit more). I was shooting HP5 so color wasn't an option

I should have really worked on the first composition though... waited for something interesting to happen.


Feb 10, 2013 at 07:29 PM
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p.1 #7 · we went to the library // FPJ


I kinda wish those images are in colour. Children libraries are vibrant with colours. Some of the late afternoon sun rays might be quite neat in colours too. Thanks for sharing!


Feb 10, 2013 at 10:24 PM
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p.1 #8 · we went to the library // FPJ


b&w is timeless, but I agree that color may cut down on some of the dizzying lines, like in #4.
Personal: these are memory builders, "my parents always took me to the library."
Use a desk and internal timer, or tripod, or have someone get YOU in the photos; your children will appreciate it later.


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