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Alpi07
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Another portrait

I'm unsure about the left side, there was a vase pending in front of the window and I didn't move it.
I think the fact that it is framing the face is ok, but I'm unsure.
In order to eliminate the blue hose support outside, I turned it in bw, but i'm not sure I did a good job, I alway have a lot of problems in bw.

canon 5d II 50mm f1.4 1/80sec ISO 3600









Feb 06, 2013 at 06:25 PM
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bw version



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Feb 06, 2013 at 06:26 PM
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If you spend a little time with it, you can get rid of all the kinks. This is the best I can do in 5 minutes.








Feb 06, 2013 at 09:03 PM
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Everything to the left of the face adds nothing to the story / impact here. Crop in the middle of the tan vertical line and use it on the left to frame the faces on the right and it will be less of a distraction.

Ask what are the focal points? Face / Reflection Then ask what is likely to pull attention off and distract then finds ways to eliminate the distraction or make it contrast less if you can't.

When in doubt I crop in tight on focal point / focal points with crop tool and expand outward until my eye is distracted by some contrasting distraction entering the frame on the edges.



Feb 07, 2013 at 01:03 AM





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