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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Sandra


Well, still working on learning studio shooting (well, always working on learning, no matter what it is). Lucky enough to have a girlfriend who likes it as much as I do so I always have a willing model

Still just getting to know the Olympus OM-D and the lenses and this is one of the first sessions with it. I haven't done a whole lot of studio shooting at all so comments and critique always welcome.

The editing too is a little bit experimental, a bit faded but warm color in oder to make it look a little bit more film like. Also added some subtle grain.

Unfortunately my apartment is too cluttered and too small (would make a great studio without any furniture though) for full body portraits so nothing but headshots now.

Regards





















Edited on Jan 31, 2013 at 10:58 AM · View previous versions



Jan 31, 2013 at 10:06 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Sandra


The first two look a little soft especially for the aperture used. They also look like they contain a lot of noise. The lighting also looks a little harsh.
Douglas



Jan 31, 2013 at 10:25 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Sandra


it looks like there is a hair on her lip in #2. very distracting
other wise, i like the processing. pretty girl.



Jan 31, 2013 at 10:28 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Sandra


Ops, missed the hair on her lip! Corrected, thanks for the heads up!

Hmmm soft and noise, well, the noise yes it's added grain, wanted it less then "digital perfect". The soft part may be due to JPG compression and web-viewing.

Here's a 100% crop from the first picture but without the added grain. Nothing soft about it IMO but always good to hear from others, looking at different screens and browsers

Agree the lighting is light/bright but still soft though.

Thanks for C&C







Jan 31, 2013 at 11:03 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Sandra


She is exquisite and you did her justice.

We can nit over anything - but this is simply a really nice set of a beautiful girl.



Jan 31, 2013 at 08:39 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Sandra


nolaguy wrote:
She is exquisite and you did her justice.

We can nit over anything - but this is simply a really nice set of a beautiful girl.


DITTO! 8-)



Feb 01, 2013 at 07:22 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Sandra


Thanks

And yes she is truly beautiful



Feb 02, 2013 at 07:29 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Sandra


1 and 3, totally digging. I like the lighting, and the processing feels very subtle. And yes, she's quite gorgeous!


Feb 02, 2013 at 09:23 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Sandra


Nice closeups, well done!


Feb 02, 2013 at 12:22 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Sandra


Nice set. The only thing I would have done different would have been to use more ambient light so you could have less pupil and more of those beautiful iris. My two pennies.


Feb 02, 2013 at 09:10 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Sandra


Thanks, believe 1 and 3 are my favorites as well

Thanks finite

UsseryG, thanks a lot for the tip about more ambient light and the pupils, I didn't even think about that but totally agree!



Feb 03, 2013 at 03:23 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Sandra


Love the added grain/noise on those. Would you share your method?

I like the 1st one the most.




Feb 06, 2013 at 10:31 AM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Sandra


nice set. Very well done!


Feb 06, 2013 at 02:35 PM





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