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Overall I like the photo. Looks good in BW as shown.
She looks nice, good expression in eye and mouth.
It is a closeup and I like the skin texture I see (looks natural and not overly processed). Good on that.
I would prefer to see more of the second eye (one behind hair).
I also suggest a bit different pose, as the one shown has a hard line (wrinkle of skin) on image right (from below ear). Try to avoid that.