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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


These were taken yesterday with my Sigma 35mm 1.4 all natural light. We were both looking for an Editorial Fashion vibe and I def think we achieved it. If you see funny faces or odd poses that is the reason

Thanks for looking
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Danielle by Tien Nguyen Photography, on Flickr

#2

IMG_7653 by Tien Nguyen Photography, on Flickr

#3

IMG_7641 by Tien Nguyen Photography, on Flickr

#4

IMG_7370 by Tien Nguyen Photography, on Flickr

#5

IMG_7521 by Tien Nguyen Photography, on Flickr

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Jan 21, 2013 at 02:46 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


Very odd expressions and over the top makeup. I like #1 the most. I do not like back lit images if the glare destroys the contrast in the image. Interesting shots.


Jan 21, 2013 at 03:03 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


Thanks for compliment, as far as the oddity of it all, we were shooting editorial / fashion material. So yeah, I didn't expect any smiles and giggles during this session.


Jan 21, 2013 at 04:00 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


Really liking #3...the flare, the composition, her expression.....
Josiah



Jan 21, 2013 at 04:06 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


very nice, 1 right is killer


Jan 21, 2013 at 04:18 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


Nice set.
1 and 2 for me...3and 4 she looks like she needs to go to the bathroom.



Jan 21, 2013 at 05:32 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


bbourizk wrote:
Nice set.
1 and 2 for me...3and 4 she looks like she needs to go to the bathroom.


Josiah Jones wrote:
Really liking #3...the flare, the composition, her expression.....
Josiah


Calcvictim wrote:
very nice, 1 right is killer


Thank you guys I added #5 too



Jan 21, 2013 at 08:02 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


#1 BW is my favorite. The color is nice in all shown. I do not like the expressions in 3 and 4 either, they look forced but the other expressions are ok. I do not like #4, with her expression she looks like she needs a bathroom quick. Again the photography is very nice.

Greg




Jan 21, 2013 at 11:07 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


Always enjoy seeing your work.
Fashion/editorial is not a genre that I can claim to totally understand but I would say your session was pretty successful.

Here are just a few observations.

- All poses except #1 are some variation of the "clutched", crossed-arms pose. It gives me a kind of a reserved/insecure vibe that was maybe what you were going for but it does come off as a bit repetitive for the set. Those poses also do a pretty good job of hiding the clothes. I know editorial is more about mood than selling the clothes but probably a good idea to keep some balance in mind.

- I understand that these are not portraits and that the 35mm gives a distinctive look but when you use it, you need to be aware of how you position it relative to the model's body and body parts. Notice how her knee looks larger than her face in #2?

- Posing is hard and of course there is always an editorial decision regarding how much to sacrifice an attractive pose to favor mood and vice-versa. But I did notice the "claw-hand" in 1A and the back-of-hands in #4 and #5. On a thin model like this, the hands can look older (veins and bones show), so it's just something to think about in terms of lighting, posing, and whether that will add-to or detract-from the mood you are going for.

- I question the cut-off hands in #1 a little bit, particularly 1A, where the bracelet sort of says "look here". Gives the impression that she is grabbing something.

These are nits though, and as I said at the top I think your session was a successful one. Nice light, nice processing. Pretty consistent mood for the set with an interesting mix of coquetish/insecure/contemplative.



Jan 21, 2013 at 12:30 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


nice fashion shots - #1


Jan 21, 2013 at 01:31 PM
 



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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


Thanks for the feedback guys!


Jan 21, 2013 at 08:05 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


this is not constructive feedback, but those shoes are blowing my mind.


Jan 22, 2013 at 03:51 AM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


I really like both the pictures. The colored one works more for me because I love the subtle background tones, it brings out the model and her features really well

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Jan 22, 2013 at 08:46 PM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


For me it is grood to be exposed to something different - Editorial/Fashion - to expand my vision of people photography.
I very much appreciated Eyeball's comments. This is where we learn. Great stuff.



Jan 22, 2013 at 08:56 PM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


How are you liking the sigma 35?


Jan 23, 2013 at 01:29 AM
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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


CoLmes wrote:
How are you liking the sigma 35?

Sigma 35 is one amazing lens, it'll run circles around the 35L.



Jan 23, 2013 at 03:41 AM
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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


Great model, posing and expressions!! Make up cool too!
No 3 for me



Jan 23, 2013 at 01:34 PM
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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


I really like #2 and #3 - she looks a little contorted but it works!


Jan 23, 2013 at 05:03 PM
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p.1 #19 · p.1 #19 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


Great job overall. I like #1 and 2


Jan 23, 2013 at 05:10 PM
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p.1 #20 · p.1 #20 · Meet Danielle | Editorial Fashion


td81 wrote:
Great job overall. I like #1 and 2


ESC in KC wrote:
I really like #2 and #3 - she looks a little contorted but it works!


magyarangol wrote:
Great model, posing and expressions!! Make up cool too!
No 3 for me


Thank you everyone, she wanted to have a more edgy raw look for 2 and 3 and she had no problem making it happen! Can't wait to do more work with her in the future



Jan 23, 2013 at 07:23 PM





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