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| p.1 #5 · A summers day with Sarah |
Nice use of light. Agree with the backlighting comments above.
1 - the composition I found very weak. While the contrast between her as the color object and the green wash of background was good, the background dominates the picture, and the eye is distracted from the subject. Placing her in the center for this shot weakens it considerably for me.
The outfit (halter top and very ugly jean shorts, freaky shoes) does not suit the model. Distant crotch level views of full body are not very flattering.
I liked 9, but would prefer to get the oof forground objects placed behind the model. Too distracting having oof in front of subject. Knock down the grass, or find a different spot.
7 works, but again the subject-background ratio seems small to me. Fill the frame a bit more with her.
5 is an excellent shot. Good focus on model. Gorgeous backlight, no distracting elements. No problem with her centered like that. Perhaps crop it to fill more of the frame with the subject.
Take all this with a grain of salt - I am a newb as far as portraiture photography goes.
Thanks for putting these up here to discuss!