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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Granddaughters - Available Light


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Jan 18, 2013 at 01:05 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Granddaughters - Available Light


Hello,

The facial expressions shown give me this impression: "Nice folks."

That is good.

It is also nice that the granddaughters have a grand who likes to take their picture...and they appear willing to be photographed. That is good.

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The #1 image appears to be not sharply focused over most of the image, and since the EXIF info indicates you shot that at f2, I suspect you made some choice to use short DOF for aesthetic reasons.

However, I don't think that works here.

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Also, it may help others to view the images and to see more detail if the pics were a bit larger. I suggest 800px on the height (maximum).





Jan 18, 2013 at 01:35 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Granddaughters - Available Light


Agree on the size of the pics. These are 1/4 the size we usually see here.

The larger size shows your picture to better advantage and makes a critique easier too.



Jan 18, 2013 at 06:38 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Granddaughters - Available Light


Thanks to both of you. I appreciate your skilled eye. I'll be certain to apply the change in f-stop the next time.



Jan 19, 2013 at 07:40 PM
 



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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Granddaughters - Available Light


Steady said it well - so I'll just give you the 'what he said' reply.


Jan 20, 2013 at 02:35 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Granddaughters - Available Light


nice portraits - the displayed pics are small


Jan 20, 2013 at 06:16 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Granddaughters - Available Light


Here are 2 more from the same shoot. I have resized them as suggested.



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