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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · First post portret




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Tips and critique is welcome!



Jan 17, 2013 at 06:40 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · First post portret


No one has taken you up with tips and critique yet, so I'll make the comments that others might start with...
If she's still available (someone you know, probably?) shoot this again and make sure you nail the focus on her eyes. This one is soft where it should be sharp. It looks like she has nice eyes -- show them!
And, I'd suggest cropping in from the right; there is more open space there than you need.
Just comments for starters,
Mark



Jan 18, 2013 at 03:25 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · First post portret


Sharper focus on the eyes, increase the black level and a little on the contrast would be my main suggestion for what that is worth. The portrait is a bit to 'hazy' for my taste. If the lips would not naturally be a little more red (dark) I would suggest to experiment with a touch of makeup. The above suggestions may emphasize small imperfections on the chin - these are temporary and therfore I would remove those to reflect a more fair permanent image of the person. Frank


Jan 18, 2013 at 04:49 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · First post portret


Good looking young lady, definitely go after the reshoot!
Douglas



Jan 18, 2013 at 05:21 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · First post portret


yes, this might be a "do over" - exposure, sharpness, contrast, etc seem to be off




Jan 18, 2013 at 06:22 PM





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