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cs3is
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Walk in the Park - C&C


What a pool of talent you guys have here. I just became a member, so i can upload pics and get some helpful tips from the pros

I just recently upgraded to 5D Mark 3 with 24-104 F4 L. Finally the weather was nice and warm ( 8 "C ), so we decided to go out and smell the fresh air.

Thanks
SB







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Walk in the Park




Jan 15, 2013 at 07:27 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Walk in the Park - C&C


Welcome to FM !!!

Looks like you had a nice outing. I wish it were that warm here now.

I tweaked on the colors for the last one a bit, mostly to neutralize the cyan/blue cast from the overhead/overcast lighting. Your call at whether you want the "blue" mood or more neutralized colors, just thought I'd post up the difference. You can see from the border in the second one a rough idea of the amount of change that is in play.

The diff is probably most noticeable in the white band of her cap, and the change from blue to purple in the sweatshirt lettering.












Jan 15, 2013 at 10:06 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Walk in the Park - C&C


Thanks Rusty. looks good to me




Jan 15, 2013 at 10:28 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Walk in the Park - C&C


I love the colors in the first two. And I love the soft look, shooting wide open or close to it.
I like the comp in #1 and the shallow DOF but I am a bit torn on your choice of where to focus. The first seat dominates the image but the attention seems meant for almost three quarters of the length down the swings to a smaller seat. I might have considered a closer point to focus on, and/or perhaps a more stopped down take.
That obsessing aside, the end result you have provided has a warm visual appeal

Scott



Jan 16, 2013 at 02:21 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Walk in the Park - C&C


Thanks for the input sbeme.

I will keep the suggestion in mind for future reference.

IB



Jan 16, 2013 at 08:30 PM





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