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p.1 #1 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


C&C is welcomed as always.



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Jan 15, 2013 at 04:38 PM
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p.1 #2 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


over 400 views and no comments, if it sucks tell me


Jan 16, 2013 at 03:20 AM
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p.1 #3 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


Well it doesnt suck! Cant give you much feedback - total newb waiting on my first portrait lens. I find the shot interesting.

Thanks for posting.



Jan 16, 2013 at 04:08 AM
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p.1 #4 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


What lens, nifty fifty?


Jan 16, 2013 at 04:27 AM
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p.1 #5 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


The extra hand/arm on the left kinda bugs me, but everything else looks great.


Jan 16, 2013 at 05:13 AM
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p.1 #6 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


Sorry you didnít get more support for your picture. I am not a professional photographer, much less a portraitist. My own tastes tend toward the hyper-conservative or, if you like--fascistic. The wild make-up, black lipstick, overt sexuality, and the like donít appeal to me. Thatís my own personal take on things, and I hope that will not discourage you from pushing the envelope. Even though I may not always like it, I still do support experimentation and new approaches to creativity.


Jan 16, 2013 at 07:07 AM
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p.1 #7 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


I think it sucks.

Remove the hand and it would be fine.

As shown, we look at the hand and wonder what the heck is going on there? That distracts too much from the model.



Jan 16, 2013 at 07:32 AM
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p.1 #8 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


it doesn't suck -- but clone out the hand


Jan 16, 2013 at 12:13 PM
 



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p.1 #9 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


thanks for the comments, I'll repost with the hand removed.

the hand that people hate was the hairstylist applying hair spray, the shot was spontaneous towards the end of the setup for the shoot itself.



Jan 16, 2013 at 12:30 PM
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p.1 #10 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


Looks like a BTS shot of the makeup being applied. I like the idea of showing the flurry of activity on/around the model. If you are showing this as a finished image, then I don't like the makeup or composition.


Jan 18, 2013 at 03:51 PM
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p.1 #11 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


A few more from the shoot, please continue C&C


49 by GlebZ, on Flickr



45 by GlebZ, on Flickr



42 by GlebZ, on Flickr



31-sepia by GlebZ, on Flickr



18 by GlebZ, on Flickr

Edited on Jan 19, 2013 at 10:26 PM · View previous versions



Jan 19, 2013 at 07:32 AM
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p.1 #12 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


Calcvictim wrote:
A few more from the shoot, please continue C&C

r


good "hi key" processing





Jan 19, 2013 at 05:05 PM
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p.1 #13 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


I really like all the pictures you have taken. The composition is great.

Edited on Jan 20, 2013 at 11:14 AM · View previous versions



Jan 19, 2013 at 08:32 PM
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p.1 #14 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


Thanks for the encouraging comments guys, this was my first time shooting in a studio. I do this more as a hobby as opposed to a business so most of my shoots are usually on location.


Jan 20, 2013 at 06:28 AM
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p.1 #15 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


Some nice images in here but I don't care for the first one. The last two could use a little shadow under her feet to ground her. Otherwise she is floating.


Jan 20, 2013 at 02:29 PM
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p.1 #16 · Photoshoot with Chelsey


Heres a thought - make the brick support completely white (especially the seated one) and it will change the statement of the piece. Or make it white, with the corners black so it looks like a 2d sketch cube.


Jan 20, 2013 at 08:00 PM





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