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LearnPhoto Offline • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #1 · A photograph I loved for critique Please critique thank you Tell me what do you like/don't like about my photograph so that I can learn and improve more. 1 week old 6D! + 16-35mm f2.8 II 16mm 1/640 sec at f/5.6, ISO 100 Jan 14, 2013 at 05:13 AM

sbeme Offline • • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #2 · A photograph I loved for critique I think its very good. The POV and division of the image is engaging and the detail and color in the reflection is quite nice. Seems like a very clean reflection with little artifacts in the glass. Did you clean it up? I think the effect can be made a bit more dramatic by some processing to bring up the brightness of the right side to better approximate the left, further engaging/confusing the viewer. Scott Jan 14, 2013 at 08:21 AM

LearnPhoto Offline • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #3 · A photograph I loved for critique Thanks for the feedback. I didn't not clean up the glass. I was also surprise of the cleanness. I have tried to brighten the reflection but it also make a piece of wood inside the window obvious. I'll try do it again. Jan 14, 2013 at 11:08 AM

RustyBug Offline • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #4 · A photograph I loved for critique I'm kinda diggin' the reflection as is ... particularly how the clouds do not look as blown in some areas. Maybe a little lift to the shadows. This is a rather unorthodox combination of formal lines and angles mixed with informal organic shapes. It also has an asymmetrical balance to it. I think the two work well together to keep the eye moving about the scene. Jan 14, 2013 at 03:47 PM

Mister Bean Offline • • • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #5 · A photograph I loved for critique RustyBug wrote: I'm kinda diggin' the reflection as is ... Agreed. I would leave it as is. Jan 14, 2013 at 08:34 PM

Travis Rhoads Online • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #6 · A photograph I loved for critique I like it as is...I would not touch it. Jan 15, 2013 at 01:48 PM

sbeme Offline • • • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #7 · A photograph I loved for critique I have to agree, withdraw my previous suggestion. I tried reprocessing to balance L and R. Hard to get the saturation and colors to match enough. The exposure part was easier. Scott Jan 15, 2013 at 03:52 PM

Bob Jarman Offline • • • • Upload & Sell: On p.1 #8 · A photograph I loved for critique Way to balance L & R would be to perhaps copy and flip image, paste flipped copy over original, mask & brush away the portion not needed. If you wanted to go to all that trouble. Bob Jan 15, 2013 at 03:56 PM

LearnPhoto Offline • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #9 · A photograph I loved for critique Bob Jarman wrote: Way to balance L & R would be to perhaps copy and flip image, paste flipped copy over original, mask & brush away the portion not needed. If you wanted to go to all that trouble. Bob thanks for the idea. i have never thought of there. it will be great for viewers to see but I would feel guilty having PP so much. hehe i wld like to leave it as it is, with realism in mind. A reflection is a virtual image and should always be less pop than a real image. Jan 15, 2013 at 06:59 PM

LearnPhoto Offline • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #10 · A photograph I loved for critique sbeme wrote: I have to agree, withdraw my previous suggestion. I tried reprocessing to balance L and R. Hard to get the saturation and colors to match enough. The exposure part was easier. Scott thanks for understanding and yr feedback Jan 15, 2013 at 07:01 PM

LearnPhoto Offline • Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #11 · A photograph I loved for critique RustyBug wrote: I'm kinda diggin' the reflection as is ... particularly how the clouds do not look as blown in some areas. Maybe a little lift to the shadows. This is a rather unorthodox combination of formal lines and angles mixed with informal organic shapes. It also has an asymmetrical balance to it. I think the two work well together to keep the eye moving about the scene. i like how you translate the complex composition into words. Jan 15, 2013 at 07:01 PM

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