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p.1 #1 · "H"...another simple portrait


Again, very simple and straight forward. Yeah, I know how most love the "brick wall"....Still learning. Thanks for looking.







Jan 09, 2013 at 03:41 AM
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p.1 #2 · "H"...another simple portrait


nice soft light - "H" looks good



Jan 09, 2013 at 11:19 AM
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p.1 #3 · "H"...another simple portrait


Quick Comments:

Nice expression shown in the image.

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Jan 09, 2013 at 04:40 PM
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p.1 #4 · "H"...another simple portrait


At least you found a spot that had the wire accent to break up the brick wall. Makes a big difference and gives her a frame to fit in.Helps focus attention away from the brick pattern back to the model. Nice image.


Jan 09, 2013 at 04:44 PM
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p.1 #5 · "H"...another simple portrait


Don't mix up the general public with FM.
I get specific requests for the brick wall, and yours is an especially nice shot!

-T



Jan 09, 2013 at 05:20 PM
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p.1 #6 · "H"...another simple portrait


Yeah, not sure what you mean about the brick wall. I shoot against brick walls whenever I find them, clients like 'em. However, unlike Jefferies, I don't like that you put her in that spot with the wire accent as it pulls attention away from your subject. That's one of the beauties of shoot a subject against a brick wall is that there is really nothing to pull the attention away from the subject.

You've captured a nice expression here, looks good. Nice job!



Jan 09, 2013 at 06:21 PM
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p.1 #7 · "H"...another simple portrait


Nice light. I like it.


Jan 09, 2013 at 07:04 PM
 



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p.1 #8 · "H"...another simple portrait


Nice shot, I like her expression

Good Job
Bob



Jan 09, 2013 at 07:35 PM
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p.1 #9 · "H"...another simple portrait


I think if you had put more brick in front of her instead of behind her my eye would be more drawn to her. I keep looking right to see if I can see more down the wall. Make sense?

thanks for sharing,
Jim




Jan 10, 2013 at 02:09 AM
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p.1 #10 · "H"...another simple portrait


I love the brick texture. Though the colors and lighting are not doing much for the picture.


Jan 10, 2013 at 05:10 PM
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p.1 #11 · "H"...another simple portrait


Cute subject, well lit, maybe a touch of contrast would be even better.


Jan 10, 2013 at 06:15 PM
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p.1 #12 · "H"...another simple portrait


I like the shot too. Very nice.

A few minor nits -

I don't think you should finish it at the bottom by cropping through a button or a pocket flap or even the half cuff of her right arm.

Another minor thought - if her left arm were posed more forward, you'd likely crop more off the right side. Then you'd compose with her off center a tad more.

I see no problem with the brick wall.



Jan 11, 2013 at 09:38 PM
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p.1 #13 · "H"...another simple portrait


I donít know what the problem is with the brick wall. Looks like a lovely shot to me.


Jan 11, 2013 at 10:06 PM





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