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| p.1 #5 · First Post - Part 1... (Portraits of my Wife) |
Welcome to posting in this forum!
I hope you enjoy your time spent here.
First...my standard intro to anyone "new" to me on this forum...
My comments or suggestions below are not a criticism of you, your model, your talent or skill. I offer them in a friendly tone of voice and with the sole intent to help you with a second POV and set of eyes. If you read sincere questions and simple suggestions as "criticism" of you, then you will miss how I am trying to help you.
Of course this may be your own "style" or your own "vision" and I suppose we can assume that the images look just like they do because that is exactly how you like them. That is OK too. It just shows that there are differences of "opinion" on what looks good. IF these are exactly what you want and like, then by all means continue making your images look like that and have fun doing it. I can only speak for myself and what I do or do not find appealing in the posted photos. As I always say: "Follow your own muse."
She is pretty, and that always helps a photo.
Of this set I prefer the images 1 and 2.
My favorite from the set is image 2, because of expression and turn of head.
In image 2, I would prefer to see a little more space (not much) in front of the face, so I do think the image is a little tightly composed (for my taste).
Others have mentioned the distracting elements (color, patterns of clothing and background). I think color, patterns and other elements can be used to make a very nice portrait...with care.