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Compelling image. In addition to the recommendations about warmth, I would suggest trying a 10x8 crop to eliminate a good portion of the background in front of her. Normally, I would like to see some "gaze-into" space in front of the subject but in this case:
- she's not really gazing
- the important relationship here is her being "energized" by the sun
- that crop would put her head in the ROT spot and I think would inject a little more balance. I'm not a slave to ROT but in this case balance/energy/harmony seem to be a good mix.
Just a suggestion.