I had a fun couple this past Saturday, and we came up with this idea for a shot. I had taken the picture of the church a few months ago, and put them together. I hand sketched the scratch marks.
I agree with the jacket. Groom's expression is perfect. Bride needs to look like she is pulling hard and maybe a little b*tchy expression.
Especially considering it is a composite, the church should be straight, not leaning to left.
One last nit - the heavy shadow on the couple doesn't match the lighting on the church.
The concept is a lot of fun thought and I am positive the couple will really like it!