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Bob Jarman wrote:
Thanks for your thoughts - my mental breakdown is three diagonal areas, the rightmost negative space balancing the lighter to its left. Perhaps that does not work for many folks? Coupled with the inclination of her head, I'm not sure more a square crop would work?
To me, focus on the left eye is problematic, but then maybe it is my tired eyes and a new set of contacts?
Your composition works for me. Focus on the left eye indeed is problematic, that's why I said DoF was too thin - but I'm aware some people don't mind it as long as the closest eye is in focus. But it does look odd in this image. The mouth also appears to be out of focus, albeit just slightly.