I love your shots, but in this one she seems a little too far to the left of the frame. It almost makes my attention move from her to the objects on the right, as if they're deliberately in the shot. Perhaps a square crop would work better this time. Just a thought.
There is a recent string on this forum about negative comments, that provides both light and heat. I have been blessed with very helpful constructive criticism on this forum. Please keep it up! :-)
Thank you, Beetle! I was using the Nikon D90. The good news is that I used the NIKKOR 85mm f1.4 (@f2.8). The bad news is that it went back to LensRental.com, where it lives. I was hoping that Santa might bring one, but not this year.