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moconnell
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p.1 #1 · J/D e-session C+C please


Hi All,

Long time lurker and first time posting here. A few images from a recent e-session. I would appreciate C+C from the wonderful people in this forum.

Thanks for looking

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Dec 21, 2012 at 08:29 PM
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p.1 #2 · J/D e-session C+C please


#2 is very out of focus. Ditch the tilt in your horizons. The variety is good here.


Dec 22, 2012 at 12:30 AM
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p.1 #3 · J/D e-session C+C please


Thanks Aron,

I think #2 screwed-up down sizing for web. I will rework the horizons before it goes out to the couple.



Dec 22, 2012 at 01:51 PM
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p.1 #4 · J/D e-session C+C please


Shots like #2 are common occasions where my cameras will focus on the background.


Dec 23, 2012 at 12:41 AM
 

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p.1 #5 · J/D e-session C+C please


#6 and #10 are the only ones I'd keep from this set, if they were mine.

I really like #6.

Issues:

#2 - badly out of focus, even at low-res.
#3 - the bell is really overpowering with this composition. The bride/groom blocks seem like an afterthought.
#4 - you chopped the guy's hair. Maybe just personal preference, but chopping hair in that type of comp really bugs me.
#5,#7 & #8 - really awkward, forced posing. They don't look natural at all.
#9 - I like this one, but the stars are a real distraction, and the comp isn't too strong to emphasize them. If it were my image, I'd have cloned the stars out, zoomed in a bit and place them closer to a convergence point on either the rule of thirds or the golden mean. With no other compositional elements in the frame, that would be my approach to maximize impact...

That's my $0.02. Hope you find it useful!



Dec 23, 2012 at 02:45 AM
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p.1 #6 · J/D e-session C+C please


Thank you James. I appreciate your comments.


Dec 23, 2012 at 02:15 PM
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p.1 #7 · J/D e-session C+C please


The train tracks shot is the mother of all cliches in portrait photography. Just sayin'.

brad



Dec 23, 2012 at 03:39 PM
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p.1 #8 · J/D e-session C+C please


Doesn't look like there was much thought into directional lighting...


Dec 25, 2012 at 07:49 AM





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