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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Two models at studio


First post from studio.





















Edited on Dec 19, 2012 at 09:06 PM · View previous versions



Dec 19, 2012 at 07:18 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Two models at studio


Howdy.

Quick Comments:

The expressions are nice in images 1 and 2.

I don't care for the pose in 3. Reason: See legs.



Dec 19, 2012 at 08:10 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Two models at studio


New to form, learning to navigate!
Thanks for the C&C.



Dec 19, 2012 at 08:30 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Two models at studio


Hi again,

A friendly suggestion offered in a friendly tone of voice to help you and others here:

Retain the Original Image and the Edits in the Discussion.
When you post a photo, and then make additional edits (changes) to that photo in response to comments in a discussion like this, leave the original image where it was and as it was first shown (unless simply resizing it) as that way the other viewers can see the progression of edits.

Why?

Because when someone simply replaces a photo with an newer edited version the viewers will not see the original image that prompted the critique or suggestions or comments.

In this case, by replacing the last image (3) with a cropped version, the legs no longer show and my comments no longer apply.






Dec 19, 2012 at 08:42 PM
 



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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Two models at studio


I am sorry for the mistake, and understand your comments. I enjoy this form and the C&C are always welcomed. I'm posting the original third photo again, as you sugested.


Dec 19, 2012 at 09:05 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Two models at studio


THese are well lit. The first shot, the hair over here eye is a bit distracting, but it's not horrible. 2 and 3 are rally nice and 4, not a fan of the pose. I like the crop (#3) better than the full shot.


Dec 26, 2012 at 04:31 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Two models at studio


Two questions you should consider and answer yourself: 1. Between the first two images, which one is better lit on her face and why? 2. Between the third and fourth images, which one is more flattering to her and why? (Steady already answered this one for you, but for future shots, it's something to learn from. What is it about the legs that doesn't flatter her?)


Dec 26, 2012 at 04:54 PM





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