her right hand position is odd, personally I would like a bit more light on the right side of her face also seems like a bright streak of light down her nose and a bright spot under her left eye. Her hair is nicely lit and so is the couch and dress
I'm fine with the hand, personally. I think the whole shot is pretty damn good, except the hotspots on her face -- a bit too strong with the light IMO. I struggle with this myself, depending on the modifier.
Really nice. A little hot on the left cheek. I would clone out the bright return near the heal her left shoe. The rest of the skin tone, pose, hair, and lighting is excellent.
Thanks for taking the time to look and comment.
I agree with the hotspot on her face. Regarding the hand she kept leaning on it and gave her big arms, so we went with this... I have a couple of other frames where the hand is more forward and actually looks better, but her facial expression in this one is better.
Matt Leitholt wrote:
Overall I like it, but the face could use some work, looks a little blotchy.
Thanks for taking a look mate.
The make up she was wearing wasn't helping either.
Have edited again and looks better.
my .02 cents: a) she's beautiful; b) I like the saturation; c) her eyes drew me to her face, more than her hand pulled me away, but that was only after I pulled myself away from those stupid-looking combat boots she's wearing They just look so out of context from the rest of your photo.
anthonysemone wrote:
my .02 cents: a) she's beautiful; b) I like the saturation; c) her eyes drew me to her face, more than her hand pulled me away, but that was only after I pulled myself away from those stupid-looking combat boots she's wearing They just look so out of context from the rest of your photo.
Hey Anthony,
out of the shoes she brought with her these suited the dress and the idea I was after better.
Regards
Bud