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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Laura


Your thoughts on this photo please.





Thanks for looking



Dec 15, 2012 at 01:37 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Laura


her right hand position is odd, personally I would like a bit more light on the right side of her face also seems like a bright streak of light down her nose and a bright spot under her left eye. Her hair is nicely lit and so is the couch and dress


Dec 15, 2012 at 02:14 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Laura


I'm fine with the hand, personally. I think the whole shot is pretty damn good, except the hotspots on her face -- a bit too strong with the light IMO. I struggle with this myself, depending on the modifier.


Dec 15, 2012 at 05:29 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Laura


Really nice. A little hot on the left cheek. I would clone out the bright return near the heal her left shoe. The rest of the skin tone, pose, hair, and lighting is excellent.

Jim



Dec 16, 2012 at 08:13 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Laura


Thanks for taking the time to look and comment.
I agree with the hotspot on her face. Regarding the hand she kept leaning on it and gave her big arms, so we went with this... I have a couple of other frames where the hand is more forward and actually looks better, but her facial expression in this one is better.

Thanks again
Bud



Dec 16, 2012 at 11:02 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Laura


I like the concept and the way you've executed it, but the image is too contrasty for me. It just doesn't seem to flatter the model.

Des



Dec 16, 2012 at 07:50 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Laura


I think this is a nice shot. Agree on the hot spot on her face, but that's an easy fix.



Dec 26, 2012 at 04:48 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Laura


Along with the above, looks like the couch is floating in space.


Dec 26, 2012 at 05:47 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Laura


Agree with all the comments above but I still like the composition over all. Thank you for sharing



Dec 26, 2012 at 09:13 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Laura


Thanks for the feedback.
I liked the shot turned out but can see it needs some work... will shoot it again hopefully soon.
Regards
Bud



Dec 28, 2012 at 12:37 PM
 



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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Laura


Overall I like it, but the face could use some work, looks a little blotchy.


Dec 28, 2012 at 07:15 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Laura


Matt Leitholt wrote:
Overall I like it, but the face could use some work, looks a little blotchy.

Thanks for taking a look mate.
The make up she was wearing wasn't helping either.
Have edited again and looks better.



Dec 30, 2012 at 11:02 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Laura


Agree with above but I like it.


Jan 03, 2013 at 02:27 AM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Laura


my .02 cents: a) she's beautiful; b) I like the saturation; c) her eyes drew me to her face, more than her hand pulled me away, but that was only after I pulled myself away from those stupid-looking combat boots she's wearing They just look so out of context from the rest of your photo.


Jan 06, 2013 at 11:25 PM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · Laura


MDJAK wrote:
Agree with above but I like it.


Thanks for taking the time to look mate



Jan 08, 2013 at 02:14 PM
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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · Laura


anthonysemone wrote:
my .02 cents: a) she's beautiful; b) I like the saturation; c) her eyes drew me to her face, more than her hand pulled me away, but that was only after I pulled myself away from those stupid-looking combat boots she's wearing They just look so out of context from the rest of your photo.


Hey Anthony,
out of the shoes she brought with her these suited the dress and the idea I was after better.
Regards
Bud



Jan 08, 2013 at 02:16 PM
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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · Laura


A couple more shots from that shoot.













Jan 08, 2013 at 02:17 PM
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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · Laura


I like the last two much better than the first, there's just so much going on in 1 that it doesn't seem cohesive.


Jan 08, 2013 at 03:14 PM
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p.1 #19 · p.1 #19 · Laura


I love the pictures. The only thing I don't like are the light spots in the first one, they don't go too well.

Edited on Jan 09, 2013 at 01:22 AM · View previous versions



Jan 08, 2013 at 08:27 PM
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p.1 #20 · p.1 #20 · Laura


#2, by far the best of the series, IMHO - and the shoes work


Jan 08, 2013 at 09:27 PM





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