Russ Isabella Offline Upload & Sell: On
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Tim: Welcome to the photo-posting world of the Sports Corner.
Your first shot is by far your best. Nice action, framing, symmetry, etc. Second shot is for the recycle bin--headless, out-of-focus foreground player, another player with his back to you, ball mostly out of view and awkward action. I'd be interested to know what you saw in this image that led you to post it. (I think this is a great way to improve not only your shooting, but also your decision-making about which are your better shots. Explain what you saw and then hear from others about what they see. Beginning to be able to see your images through others' eyes is an important part of the learning process.) Third shot offers nice action but is not in focus. Same with the fourth shot as far as I can tell (the backlighting might be causing some of the problems here). I like what you've captured with your fifth shot, but it doesn't look crisp to me. Same focus issues with #6, and I'm not crazy about the action moment--missing leg of player controlling the ball and the defender is too far away. What does the next shot in the sequence look like? Last shot has potential but it seems to suffer from sharpening artifacts or something of the sort.
Timing is good on most, framing isn't bad. Time to work on nailing focus. Keep shooting and posting, and thanks for sharing your work.
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