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Nov 28, 2012 at 01:07 AM
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Not a big fan of it, due in large part to the dark eyes and fade to black.


Nov 28, 2012 at 01:12 AM
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Fair point on the fade, but her eyes are very, very dark, that part wasn't me.

She's got huge, deep hazel eyes.

Here's a crop of the original, SOOC shot:



They really are that dark.



Nov 28, 2012 at 01:18 AM
 



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The image is good, but I think that there is a bit of a conflict going on between subject and processing.
ie: baby = happy soft bright and processing = dark, moody and gritty.

Now the tension that comes from that could be what you are going for. And it will likely bring a stronger response (good or bad) from the viewer.

The one technical thing I will note is that it seems that the light fall off is very abrupt. Perhaps feathering it a bit would help.



Nov 28, 2012 at 01:42 AM
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Agree on the dark eyes.

Positioning a light to give you a catchlight would make a nice improvement.



Nov 28, 2012 at 06:56 AM
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Hi,

Quick Comment: I don't like the "floating head" look, for people of any age..



Nov 28, 2012 at 02:14 PM





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