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+1 @ lovely daughter.
Also, +1 @ #2 being the most relaxed looking of the three. Even with as lovely and engaging of a subject as your daughter, these three illustrate that getting a person into a natural state that translates well via the camera isn't the easiest thing to do. Good portrait photographers are much more about people than they are about cameras.
That being said ... Dad has done pretty well, for a dad.
Karen is more versed @ portraits, but ... here's a stab @ #2.
Color correction for cyan cast
Lightening / sharpening @ eyes
Slight blur @ BG
Overall sharpening/levels tweak