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Archive 2012 · On a train - B&W, C&C
  
 
mnapuran
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · On a train - B&W, C&C


A few of us got together the other evening and took some shots at a local spot downtown.

This shot was taken in natural light, no flash, sun setting, minimal editing...

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Nov 27, 2012 at 04:40 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · On a train - B&W, C&C


Very nice. I like the creamy B&W treatment.
thanks for sharing.



Nov 27, 2012 at 09:51 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · On a train - B&W, C&C


Thanks...


Nov 28, 2012 at 03:24 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · On a train - B&W, C&C


Some Thoughts.

1. Image looks a bit soft for my eyes.
2. Pose is very "static" and flat. Consider giving her a bit more structure to add some interest and allow her to engage the camera a bit more. Use the doorway, hand rail to bring some structure to the shot.
3. The crop is awkward here cut off at the crotch and then a weird hand crop also. For my money crop wider or tighter here.

The shot has a lot of potential and the model looks like she would be pretty good to work worth.



Nov 30, 2012 at 12:02 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · On a train - B&W, C&C


Thanks... she was actually posing for another photog, and I was taking more "candid" shots. I'll definitely agree on the crop


Nov 30, 2012 at 04:24 AM





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